What I learned from Job Interview.
학생이 쓴 원문
On Tuesday, I had a job interview.
I\'m not satisfied with my attitude, and answer during the interview. Here is some reasons, and my regrets about it.
I should have prepared not only for PR position, but also Sales abroad. When submit the applicant, I can chose 2 positions that I want to work in. But I just prepared interview for the PR position only, and It makes me confused when I knew the position which is considered as my job is 2nd preference position. From this mistake, I\'ve learned that preventing for unpredictable situation is also skill. Therefore, I will consider every possibility about job interview, or work.
After the job interview, I was so depressed about what happened. I will not forget this experience, and I believe this will be my another step for progress.
강사 첨삭
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On Tuesday, I had a job interview.
>>Last Tuesday, I had a job interview.
I\'m not satisfied with my attitude, and answer during the interview.
>>I\'m not satisfied with my attitude and answers during the interview.
Here is some reasons, and my regrets about it.
>>Here are some reasons and my regrets about it.
I should have prepared not only for PR position, but also Sales abroad.
>>I should have prepared not only for the PR position, but also for the Sales abroad position.
When submit the applicant, I can chose 2 positions that I want to work in.
>>When I submitted the application, I can choose two positions that I want to work for.
But I just prepared interview for the PR position only, and It makes me confused when I knew the position which is considered as my job is 2nd preference position.
>>But I only prepared for the PR position interview, and it made me confused that the interview was actually for the second position.
From this mistake, I\'ve learned that preventing for unpredictable situation is also skill.
>>Because of this mistake, I\'ve learned that preventing unpredictable situations is also a skill.
Therefore, I will consider every possibility about job interview, or work.
>>Therefore, I will consider every possibility about job interviews.
After the job interview, I was so depressed about what happened.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>After the job interview, I felt depressed about what happened.
I will not forget this experience, and I believe this will be my another step for progress.
>>I will not forget this experience, and I believe this will be a part of another step in my progress.
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