What I like best about my town.
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There is a lake park in my town. The lake park is beautiful, large and clean. The park is near from my home and take 10minute on foot.
I love the park because I could take a walk, go on a picnic, ride a bicycle in the park. Maybe most of neighborhoods in my town like the park too.
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Thank you for accomplishing your homework. It was a delight reading it and knowing what you like best about your hometown.
Here are the corrections to your composition:
What I like best about my town.
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There is a lake park in my town.
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The lake park is beautiful, large and clean.
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The park is near from my home and take 10minute on foot.
>>> The park is near my home and it takes 10 minutes on foot.
>>> The park is near my home and it takes 10 minutes on foot.
I love the park because I could take a walk, go on a picnic, ride a bicycle in the park.
>>> I love the park because I could take a walk, go on a picnic, or ride a bicycle in the park.
Maybe most of neighborhoods in my town like the park too.
>>> Maybe, most of my neighbors like the park, too.
OR >>> Maybe, most of the neighborhoods in my town like the park, too.
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