What I liked her.
학생이 쓴 원문
I liked her silly. She was different that I expected. She was not that pretty but cute and I thought she was stupid but she wasn\'t that stupid just did not study. And she showed up her mood on her face. That I liked her points.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Thomas!
It is interesting to know what you liked about her because there was a strong attraction between the two of you that is why you chose each other.
Anyway, as I told you in class, it is a wonder how two strangers can be lovers, then back to strangers because they do no longer like to settle their differences.
Have you ever wondered what she liked about you?
Study carefully my suggestions below. Great job!
See you!
-T. Donna~
>> I liked her silliness.
She was different that I expected.
>> She was different from what I expected.
She was not that pretty but cute and I thought she was stupid but she wasn\'t that stupid just did not study.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!
And she showed up her mood on her face.
>> And, she showed her mood on her face.
That I liked her points.
>> Those are the points I liked about her.
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