What I'm doing nowadays.

2010-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was in the US, I got many opportunities to have foreign foods such as authentic Chinese food, Indian one, or Thai dishes. I enjoyed a lot so that I didn't miss Korean food at all. I'm even a little bit tired of having Korean food now and then. I miss the food which I had in the US very much. I treid to make Iindian curry with coconut milk. It came out good since I liked the soft taste of it. I had a beaverage made of coconuts and mango. I'm going to try to make it tomorrow but I don't know the exact recipe. I'll just give it a shot. The most thing I miss is Chinese food. There are a lot of Chinese restaurants in Seoul but those are not authentic chinese foods. Even more, it is very difficult cook those food so I can't even think of trying to cook them. I miss them a lot.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Happy Thanksgiving!!Here are some of my corrections for you:   When I was in the US, I got many opportunities to have foreign foods such as authentic Chinese food, Indian one, or Thai dishes. >> Correct >> When I was in the US, I got many opportunities to try foreign foods such as authentic Chinese food, Indian one, or Thai dishes.  I enjoyed a lot so that I didn't miss Korean food at all. >> Correct I'm even a little bit tired of having Korean food now and then. >> Correct I miss the food which I had in the US very much. >> Correct I treid to make Iindian curry with coconut milk. >> I tried to make Indian curry with coconut milk. It came out good since I liked the soft taste of it. >> Correct I had a beaverage made of coconuts and mango. >> I had a beverage made of coconuts and mango. I'm going to try to make it tomorrow but I don't know the exact recipe. >> correct I'll just give it a shot. The most thing I miss is Chinese food. >> Correct There are a lot of Chinese restaurants in Seoul but those are not authentic chinese foods. >> There are a lot of Chinese restaurants in Seoul but those are not authentic Chinese foods.  Even more, it is very difficult cook those food so I can't even think of trying to cook them. I miss them a lot. >> Even more, it is very difficult to cook those food so I can't even think of trying to cook them. I miss them a lot.  

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