What I'm doing nowadays.
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When I was in the US, I got many opportunities to have foreign foods such as authentic Chinese food, Indian one, or Thai dishes. I enjoyed a lot so that I didn't miss Korean food at all. I'm even a little bit tired of having Korean food now and then. I miss the food which I had in the US very much. I treid to make Iindian curry with coconut milk. It came out good since I liked the soft taste of it. I had a beaverage made of coconuts and mango. I'm going to try to make it tomorrow but I don't know the exact recipe. I'll just give it a shot. The most thing I miss is Chinese food. There are a lot of Chinese restaurants in Seoul but those are not authentic chinese foods. Even more, it is very difficult cook those food so I can't even think of trying to cook them. I miss them a lot.
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Hello there!
Happy Thanksgiving!!Here are some of my corrections for you:
When I was in the US, I got many opportunities to have foreign foods such as authentic Chinese food, Indian one, or Thai dishes.
>> Correct
>> When I was in the US, I got many opportunities to try foreign foods such as authentic Chinese food, Indian one, or Thai dishes.
I enjoyed a lot so that I didn't miss Korean food at all.
>> Correct
I'm even a little bit tired of having Korean food now and then.
>> Correct
I miss the food which I had in the US very much.
>> Correct
I treid to make Iindian curry with coconut milk.
>> I tried to make Indian curry with coconut milk.
It came out good since I liked the soft taste of it.
>> Correct
I had a beaverage made of coconuts and mango.
>> I had a beverage made of coconuts and mango.
I'm going to try to make it tomorrow but I don't know the exact recipe.
>> correct
I'll just give it a shot. The most thing I miss is Chinese food.
>> Correct
There are a lot of Chinese restaurants in Seoul but those are not authentic chinese foods.
>> There are a lot of Chinese restaurants in Seoul but those are not authentic Chinese foods.
Even more, it is very difficult cook those food so I can't even think of trying to cook them. I miss them a lot.
>> Even more, it is very difficult to cook those food so I can't even think of trying to cook them. I miss them a lot.
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