What I\'m grateful for this Christmas..
학생이 쓴 원문
What I\'m grateful for this Christmas is that all my family members started the year healthy and were able to finish it.
Although my parents are separated, I hope they are healthy and my family overcame COVID-19.
And I think it was a year when I was busy at work, but I was recognized as much as I was busy and showed my abilities well.
This year, many new tasks were added and many new tasks were finished well.
As a team leader of a Filipino employee, I worked together and experienced new projects.
And I didn\'t think I would be able to do English conversation classes for a long time, but I think I will eventually achieve my goal of three months. I want to try harder to improve my English next year.
Although I spent this Christmas with my family in another city, I think this will also remain a good memory.
강사 첨삭
Hi Evan :)
You had a great year. You have so many memories to treasure. I wish that you would have more next year!
What I\'m grateful for this Christmas is that all my family members started the year healthy and were able to finish it.
>> The thing I am most grateful for this Christmas is my family being healthy from the beginning and ending of this year.
Although my parents are separated, I hope they are healthy and my family overcame COVID-19.
>> Although my parents are separated, I still hope that they are healthy.
And I think it was a year when I was busy at work, but I was recognized as much as I was busy and showed my abilities well.
>> I think that this year I was very busy due to work but I was able to recognize my skills and abilities well.
This year, many new tasks were added and many new tasks were finished well.
>> CORRECT
As a team leader of a Filipino employee, I worked together and experienced new projects.
>> As a team leader of a Filipino employee, I worked well together with him and experienced new projects.
And I didn\'t think I would be able to do English conversation classes for a long time, but I think I will eventually achieve my goal of three months.
>> And I didn\'t think I would be able to do English conversation classes for a long time, but I think I will eventually achieve my goal in those three months.
I want to try harder to improve my English next year.
>> CORRECT
Although I spent this Christmas with my family in another city, I think this will also remain a good memory.
>> I spent this Christmas with my family in another city and I think this will also remain a good memory.
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