What I’m most afraid of
학생이 쓴 원문
I’m afraid of Time flies because when I’m playing games the time is very fast and when I take a test, I feel so nervous I might not solve all of the question because of the time that is so fast. Lastly when I try to get some rest, it feels like time is like a rocket. That is why I’m most afraid of Time flies.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
See you in our class later ^^
T. DON
HOMEWORK:
I’m afraid of Time flies because when I’m playing games the time is very
fast and when I take a test, I feel so nervous I might not solve all of
the question because of the time that is so fast. Lastly when I try to
get some rest, it feels like time is like a rocket. That is why I’m most afraid of Time flies.
>> I’m afraid when time flies because when I’m playing games, time is very
fast and when I take a test, I feel so nervous I might not solve all of
the questions because time is so fast. Lastly when I try to
get some rest, it feels like time is like a rocket. That is why I’m most afraid when time flies.
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