What I need in my friendship.
학생이 쓴 원문
When it comes to friendship, I come up with the words \"comfortable\"
As I get older nowadays, I become shy I think,
I originally was very active and sociable person but maybe i become exhausted.
because it\'s difficult to keep the contact with someone continuously.
but I like to chat with my friends about my daily life or their lives.
(especially with the someone whom I chat with needs to be friendly and comfortable.)
There are some people who I am comfortable when I am with.
I can relieve my stress when I am with them and chat a lot about something.
I don\'t need feasible(realizable) method from them, just I want them to hear my story.
I can receive the energy from them.
and I want to give them my energy and good thoughts.
It\'s my happiness that I have time with them and have some delicious foods.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Juliet! Thank you so much for your thoughts regarding this topics. I appreciate it.
Sincerely
T. James
When it comes to friendship, I come up with the words \"comfortable\"
>>> CORRECT
As I get older nowadays, I become shy I think,
>>> I think, as I get older nowadays, I was a little bit shy.
I originally was very active and sociable person but maybe i become exhausted.
>>> I originally was a very active and sociable person but maybe I was exhausted because it\'s difficult to keep the contact with someone continuously.
but I like to chat with my friends about my daily life or their lives.
(especially with the someone whom I chat with needs to be friendly and comfortable.)
>>> CORRECT
There are some people who I am comfortable when I am with.
>>>There are some people with whom I am comfortable when I am with.
I can relieve my stress when I am with them and chat a lot about something.
>>> CORRECT
I don\'t need feasible(realizable) method from them, just I want them to hear my story.
>>> I don\'t need a feasible(realizable) method from them, just I want them to hear my story.
I can receive the energy from them.
>>> CORRECT
and I want to give them my energy and good thoughts.
>>> CORRECT
It\'s my happiness that I have time with them and have some delicious foods.
>>> It\'s my happiness that I have time with them and have some delicious food.
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