What I put on my hand
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First, I put usually a smartphone in my hand.
Second, I put usually a book in my hand.
Third, I put usually a snack in my hand.
Lastly, I put usually a remote in my hand.
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First, I put usually a smartphone in my hand.
>> First, I usually hold a smartphone on my hand.
Second, I put usually a book in my hand.
>> Second, I usually hold a book using my hands.
Third, I put usually a snack in my hand.
Third, I put usually a snack in my hand.
>> Third, I usually pick snacks using my hand.
Lastly, I put usually a remote in my hand.
>> Lastly, I usually hold a remote control with my hand.
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