What i think about online market

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I have many things to tell about it.

>>> OR: I have many things to say about this.

Because I’m a sales man in hyper(hyper means the one of offline market).

>>> Because I\'m a salesman in a hypermarket.

I know buying what they need through the internet has a lot of advantages.

>>> Correct!

Especially, online price is cheaper than offline market.

>>> The firs advantage is the prices are a lot lower than those of the offline market.

And that makes me difficult to sell something.
>>> And that gives me difficulty in selling something.

Of course, I’m a beneficiary too.

>>> OR: Of course, I also benefit from online markets.

Because I’ve bought that I need something.

>>> Because I buy some things online.

But it is different matter to me.

>>> But it\'s a different matter to me.

because I am a sales person who is evaluated one’s turnover.

>>> Because I am a sales person who is evaluated at a particular time.

In case of usual person who no matter what happening there is, they’d love to buy through internet.

>>> In case of people who are not related to this job, they love to buy through the internet.

Above all things, cheap price is the best advantage for usual customer.
>>> Above all things, the cheap price is the best advantage for usual customers.

But I just wanna tell them something, not as a sales person but just one person who want to convey some good information for you.

>>> But I just want to tell them something, not as a sales person but just one who wants to convey some good information.

Offline market has some benefit that online market doesn’t have.

>>> Correct!

For example, you can see in direct for product and can hear about product’s advantage from the market sales man and so on.

>>> For example, you can see the products directly and you can hear the products\' advantages from the market\'s salesmen.