What I think about paparazzi?
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I think of the paparazzies negatively unless the issues are not related to politics.
>> I think of the paparazzi negatively so long the issues are not related to politics.
The reason why is that it is invasion of someone\'s privacy.
>> CORRECT
We, the publics, just have to see what celebrities want to be seen by people. Because we don\'t need to know and we don\'t have rights to know about their privacy.
>> We, the publics, just have to see what celebrities want to be seen by people because we don\'t need to know and we don\'t have rights to know about their privacy.
I think that the people who want to know are just looking for gossips or like talking about other people.
>> CORRECT
On the other hand, if the issues that paparazzi released are related to policy, we must know about them.
>> CORRECT
The reasons why are that our society is democratic so that we are the owner of country, therefore we have right to know.
>> The reasons why are that our society is democratic so that we are the owner of the country, therefore we have right to know.
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