What I think about tattoos

2022-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it\'s freedom to get a tattoo. I don\'t like Tattoo either, but I think it\'s freedom because everyone has different ideas.But I don\'t want to tattoo because my skin can get bad.

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I think it\'s freedom to get a tattoo.

>> I think tattoos are a symbol of our freedom.

I don\'t like Tattoo either, but I think it\'s freedom because everyone has different ideas.

>> I don\'t like tattoos either but I think it\'s our freedom because everyone has their own ideas.

But I don\'t want to tattoo because my skin can get bad

>> But for me, I don\'t want to get a tattoo because it can be bad for my skin.

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