what i think of family

what is family? what do you think? i think a family is a group of people that love each other. if there is a group of people. but if they don't love each other i think that is not a real family. like the story name cinderella. cinderella have a step mother and a sister. and they don't think cinderella a family, they think her as a servent. if i become a presindnt i will live whith childern whith no love. but i won't be a presindnt. if you become a presindnt, would you care of them? THE END BYE~ BYE~

Hello Ji[이름]! I agree with what you said here. Being together doesn\'t mean that you are a family. There must be love, understanding and compassion between you. Thank you for sending your composition. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ what is family? >> CORRECT! what do you think? >> CORRECT! i think a family is a group of people that love each other. >> I think a family is a group of people who love each other. if there is a group of people. but if they don\'t love each other i think that is not a real family.   >> A group of people who live together but don\'t love each other is not a real family. like the story name cinderella. >> It\'s like the story of Cinderella. cinderella have a step mother and a sister. >> Cinderella has a stepmother and two stepsisters. and they don\'t think cinderella a family, they think her as a servent. >> They didn\'t think of Cinderella as family, they thought of her as a servant.if i become a presindnt i will live whith childern whith no love. >> If I become the president, I will live with less fortunate children who are not given/shown love.but i won\'t be a presindnt. >> But I won\'t be the president.if you become a presindnt, would you care of them? >> If you become the president, would you take care of them?THE END >> CORRECT! BYE~ BYE~ >> CORRECT!