What I thought.
학생이 쓴 원문
Casually, I had a thought that I didn't achieve anything to this time.
What I accomplished is nothing.
Because of such a negative thought I fell a sense of shame about my present time.
Why is the reason that suddenly I had a negative thought?
I thought, thought and thought... Finally, I concluded the reason.
The reason I thought is that I fall in mannerism.
I could not find precise reason.
Really, just I suddenly thought these ideas. I was exhausted by a repeat of same life everyday. So I decided to trip to look for myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]~All of us undergo that kind of feeling but it’s up to us how to handle it. We should be optimistic always because everything will turn out fine if that’s how we think. Just like what I’ve told you, don’t think negative thoughts. Life maybe exhausting sometimes but in the end, success and happiness await you. Keep on smiling always!
Casually, I had a thought that I didn't achieve anything to this time.
>>>Casually, I had a thought that I didn’t achieve anything up to this time.
What I accomplished is nothing.
>>>correct Because of such a negative thought I fell a sense of shame about my present time.
>>>Because of such a negative thought, I feel ashamed about my self. Why is the reason that suddenly I had a negative thought?
>>>Why is it that suddenly I had a negative thought?I thought, thought and thought... Finally, I concluded the reason.
>>>I’ve been thinking for lot of times. And, finally I concluded the reason why.The reason I thought is that I fall in mannerism.
>>>The reason I thought is that I fell in mannerism.I could not find precise reason.
>>>I could not find a precise reason.Really, just I suddenly thought these ideas.
>>>Really, I just suddenly thought these ideas
I was exhausted by a repeat of same life everyday. So I decided to trip to look for myself.
>>>I feel exhausted with the same routine everyday.
>>>So I decided to go for a trip for myself.
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