What I want from you.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
This is a good start for you.
I hope that you can appreciate you improvement over time.
Please take note of the suggestions below.
I\'ll see you in class tomorrow!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The reason why I study speaking in English is that I want to have a big confidence in speaking in English and that I want to work as a future assistant or a translator at a job field.
>> The reason why I study English is so that I can develop my confidence in speaking and for me to work as an assistant or translator in the future.
And also if I have a good skill of speaking In English, it will ve very helpfulin teaching Enlgish to my sutdents.
>> I also want to improve my skills because this will be helpful in teaching English to my own students.
Just what I want from you is that let me keep thinking and speaking in English in a limited time.
>> The only thing I want from you is to help me learn and speak in English for a limited period of time.
And you can give me a lot of homework for me to be alert and correct my errors in my sentences as much as you can
>> You can give me a lot of homework so that I can be mindful of the errors in my sentences.
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