What I want to achieve in studying English is...
학생이 쓴 원문
What I want to achieve in studying English is having a conversation without barrier.
But I know that I don\'t really do any effort to make it.
I know it doesn\'t make any sense.
But evenif I don\'t do anything, I hope something\'s gonna happen:)
강사 첨삭
Yes dear!! It doesn\'t make any sense at all. hahah. Just kidding. I think you are at least using English 20 minutes every day. haha Talk to you later! :)
What I want to achieve in studying English is having a conversation without barrier.
>> What I want to achieve in studying English is to have a good conversation without the usual barrier we feel when talking.
But I know that I don\'t really do any effort to make it.
>> I know that I don\'t really do any effort to make it that happen though.
I know it doesn\'t make any sense.
>> Correct.
But evenif I don\'t do anything, I hope something\'s gonna happen:)
>>But even if I am not doing anything special, I hope something\'s gonna happen. :)
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