What I want to change about myself
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Hi there [이름]!
Actually, I have a problem with names too. I can remember the face but I often forget their names. Let me consult someone or probably Mr. [Name] then I\'ll tell you what I can find out.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
There are so many things I want to change about myself.
>> correct!
It is my habits, my behaviors, my personality, and so on.
>> I want to change my habits, behavior, personality and so on.
I have one habit which I want to change the most among them.
>> correct!
That is the very sociality.
>> That is sociability.
OR>> That is being sociable.
The person who has sociality is very friendly with someone.
>> A person who is sociable is very friendly with everybody.
I didn\'t have the sociality.
>> I am not very sociable.
I am a shy of strangers.
>> I am shy to approach strangers.
And I am awful at remembering names and don\'t have a memory for faces.
>> correct!
I have a job which meet with so many people.
>> My job requires me to meet many people.
But sometimes, I don\'t remember the person.
>> correct!
And then, I made a mistake and I feel so sorry.
>> correct!
Is there any way a good memory for someone?
>> Is there any way to have a better memory?
If you know, please teach me!
>> If you know something, please tell me.
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