What I want to change about myself

2017-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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There are so many things I want to change about myself. It is my habits, my behaviors, my personality, and so on. I have one habit which I want to change most among them. That is the very sociality. The person who has sociality is very friendly with someone. I didn't have the sociality. I am a shy of strangers. And I am awful at remembering names and don't have a memory for faces. I have a job which meet with so many people. But sometimes I don't remember the person. And then, I made a mistake and feel so sorry. Is there any way a good memory for someone? If you know, please teach me!

강사 첨삭


Hi there [이름]!

Actually, I have a problem with names too. I can remember the face but I often forget their names. Let me consult someone or probably Mr. [Name] then I\'ll tell you what I can find out.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

There are so many things I want to change about myself.

>> correct!

It is my habits, my behaviors, my personality, and so on.

>> I want to change my habits, behavior, personality and so on.

 I have one habit which I want to change the most among them.

>> correct!

That is the very sociality.

>> That is sociability.

OR>> That is being sociable.

The person who has sociality is very friendly with someone.

>> A person who is sociable is very friendly with everybody.

I didn\'t have the sociality.

>> I am not very sociable.

I am a shy of strangers.

>> I am shy to approach strangers.

And I am awful at remembering names and don\'t have a memory for faces.

>> correct!

I have a job which meet with so many people.

>> My job requires me to meet many people.

But sometimes, I don\'t remember the person.

>> correct!

And then, I made a mistake and I feel so sorry.

>> correct!

Is there any way a good memory for someone?

>> Is there any way to have a better memory?

If you know, please teach me!

>> If you know something, please tell me.

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