What I want to change in Korea\'s education system.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to change infusion education in the education system of the country I live in. The reason most Korean students hate math is because it doesn\'t make sense and it\'s not fun. I think this is because of Korean infusion education. I believe that education is what gives you the power to solve problems on your own.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
I want to change infusion education in the education system of the country I live in.
>>> I want to change the infusion education system of the country I live in.
The reason most Korean students hate math is because it doesn\'t make sense and it\'s not fun.
>>> The reason why most Korean students hate math is that it doesn\'t make sense and it\'s not fun.
I think this is because of Korean infusion education.
>>> CORRECT!
I believe that education is what gives you the power to solve problems on your own.
>>> CORRECT!
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