what i want to change on my face.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a complex on my nose.
my nose is very smaller than other people.
A friend of mine was surprised after she touched my nose.
because my nose bone is very soft.
whenever i see beautiful nose, i wanna have a plastic surgery.
if i have a plastic surgery, i can have a confidence.
i think that many of the korean peole prefer to look like a beautiful appearance. it's very bad point i don't understand.
a few years ago, i tought personality is very important of the people. but i changed my opinion.
I wanna be beautiful better.
강사 첨삭
Hi Tracy! I was really surprised to hear that you want a nose lift.
Anyway, we you would look better that would be fine. Just remember
that being bewautiful is nice but it is more nice to have beautiful
personality. I think you have a very good personality.
Keep it up!
Love,
T. Verna
I have a complex on my nose.
>>I have a problem with my nose.my nose is very smaller than other people.
>>My nose is smaller than other people.A friend of mine was surprised after she touched my nose.
>> Correct^^Because my nose bone is very soft.
>> Correct^^whenever i see beautiful nose, i wanna have a plastic surgery.
>> whenever i see beautiful nose, i wanna have a cosmetic surgery.if i have a plastic surgery, i can have a confidence.
>>If I'll have a plastic surgery, I'll have confidence.i think that many of the korean peole prefer to look like a beautiful appearance.
>>I think that many korean peole prefer to look at beautiful physical appearance.
it's very bad point i don't understand.
>> It's a very bad, I don't understand.a few years ago, i tought personality is very important of the people. but i changed my opinion.
>> Few years ago, I tought personality is very important to people but i changed my opinion. I wanna be beautiful better.
>> I wanna be more beautiful.
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