what i want to change on my face.

2010-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I have a complex on my nose. my nose is very smaller than other people. A friend of mine was surprised after she touched my nose. because my nose bone is very soft. whenever i see beautiful nose, i wanna have a plastic surgery. if i have a plastic surgery, i can have a confidence. i think that many of the korean peole prefer to look like a beautiful appearance. it's very bad point i don't understand. a few years ago, i tought personality is very important of the people. but i changed my opinion. I wanna be beautiful better.

강사 첨삭

Hi Tracy! I was really surprised to hear that you want a nose lift. Anyway, we you would look better that would be fine. Just remember that being bewautiful is nice but  it is more nice to have beautiful personality. I think you have a very good personality. Keep it up! Love, T. Verna   I have a complex on my nose. >>I have a problem with my nose.my nose is very smaller than other people. >>My nose is smaller than other people.A friend of mine was surprised after she touched my nose. >> Correct^^Because my nose bone is very soft. >> Correct^^whenever i see beautiful nose, i wanna have a plastic surgery. >> whenever i see beautiful nose, i wanna have a cosmetic surgery.if i have a plastic surgery, i can have a confidence. >>If I'll have a plastic surgery, I'll have confidence.i think that many of the korean peole prefer to look like a beautiful appearance. >>I think that many korean peole prefer to look at beautiful physical appearance. it's very bad point i don't understand. >> It's a very bad, I don't understand.a few years ago, i tought personality is very important of the people. but i changed my opinion. >> Few years ago, I tought personality is very important to people but i changed my opinion. I wanna be beautiful better. >> I wanna be more beautiful.  

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