What I want to have..
학생이 쓴 원문
What I want to have one day is a house with not too big backyard.
And I wanna have a bodyguard or power to protect my self.
Because for me this world is not that safe to live as a woman and a kid...so at least we have to guard ourselves.
강사 첨삭
Thank you dear!! ^_^ I am happy to know about your dream. Please learn some Jujitsu or something to protect yourself and not a bodyguard because if he dies, you are doomed! haha
What I want to have one day is a house with not too big backyard.
>> What I want to have one day is a house with a not too big backyard.
And I wanna have a bodyguard or power to protect my self.
>> And, I wanna have a bodyguard or at least have the power to protect my self.
Because for me this world is not that safe to live as a woman and a kid...so at least we have to guard ourselves.
>> It is because, for me, this world is not that safe to live in as a woman and a kid. So, at least we can guard ourselves.
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