what I will do in during recess
학생이 쓴 원문
When its recess time, I will relax.
That is because I do hard homework after.
Second, I will play video game, that is because video game is much fun.
Finally, I will go out because I will eat snacks.
That is because when we do hard homework, we are hungry.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework! You
did well in terms of spelling. However, please focus on verb tense. Use the present tense when talking about your routine. Alright?
- Teacher Debbie
>> When it\'s recess, I relax.
That is because I do hard homework after.
Second, I will play video game, that is because video game is much fun.
That is because when we do hard homework, we are hungry.
That is because I do hard homework after.
>> That is because I do hard homework afterwards.
Second, I will play video game, that is because video game is much fun.
>> Second, I play video games because playing video games is fun.
Finally, I will go out because I will eat snacks.
>> Finally, I go out to eat snacks.
That is because when we do hard homework, we are hungry.
>> That is because when I do hard homework, I get hungry.
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