What I will do in winter holiday

2015-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Tomarrow(Thursday)is a start of winter holiday. Oh!~I am so excited !^^ I want to build a snow~man with my friends. The bad thing is that me and my brother has to stay at home alone because my mom have to go to work and my dad has to go to work as well.......I hope that Ican spend this winter holiday well.^^ Tomarrow is Christmas Eve so ~~MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!~~^^ ~~Emma~~^^

강사 첨삭

Hi Emma!:)   \"The holiday sesaon is a perfect time to reflect on our blessings and seek out ways to make life better for those around us.\" This Christmas, I hope that you\'ll really be merry. If it\'s just you and your brother, do something that both of you will enjoy like playing games or watching movies.^^ Wait for your parents and have Christmas dinner or supper together. I\'ll see you in class, Emma. Thank you for this composition.^___^   =T. Mayleen=   Tomarrow(Thursday)is a start of winter holiday. >> Tomorrow, Thursday, is the start of the holiday season.Oh!~I am so excited !^^ >> Oh! I am so excited!^^I want to build a snow~man with my friends. >> I want to build a snowman with my friends.The bad thing is that me and my brother has to stay at home alone because my mom have to go to work and my dad has to go to work as well....... >> The bad thing is that my brother and I will have to stay home by ourselves because my mom and dad have to go to work. I hope that Ican spend this winter holiday well.^^ >> I hope I can spend this holiday well.Tomarrow is Christmas Eve so ~~MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!~~^^ >> Tomorrow is Christmas eve so MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!^^~~Emma~~^^ >> Emma^^

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