what I will wear in the beach
학생이 쓴 원문
I will wear the swimsuit.
That is because I can swim in the sea.
Second, the swim is very funny!
Third, I like swimming in water.
Finally, swimming is good for my body
강사 첨삭
I will wear the swimsuit.
>> I will wear swim trunks.
That is because I can swim in the sea.
>> This is a good sentence!
Second, the swim is very funny!
>> Second, swimming is fun.
Third, I like swimming in water.
>> This is a good sentence!
Finally, swimming is good for my body
>> Finally, swimming is good for my body.
Good job, [이름]! It\'s good that you know that swimming is good for your body. I hope you were able to go swimming this summer.
>> I will wear swim trunks.
That is because I can swim in the sea.
>> This is a good sentence!
Second, the swim is very funny!
>> Second, swimming is fun.
Third, I like swimming in water.
>> This is a good sentence!
Finally, swimming is good for my body
>> Finally, swimming is good for my body.
Good job, [이름]! It\'s good that you know that swimming is good for your body. I hope you were able to go swimming this summer.
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