What I would most like to have invented?

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I would most like to have invented a huge air cleaner.

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Korean people have been suffered from fine dust since a few years ago.

>> Korean people have been suffering from the fine dust weather for a few years now.

The casue of appearing fine dust is divisive issue, but I think it is because the factories which are located on the east coast lines of China.

>> The cause of the appearance of fine dust is a divisive issue but I thing it is because the factories which are located in the east coast lines of China.

But the press say that it is because of domestic problems such as using lots of car, thermal power station and ,ridiculously, cooking mackerel.

>> However, the press say that it is because of the domestic problems such as the skyrocketing car usage, thermal power station and, ridiculously, cooking mackerel.

Anyway, there are two reasons that I want to invent a huge air cleaner.

>> Anyway, those are the two reasons why I want to invent a huge air cleaner.

First, fine dust is directly linked to health problems.

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It will be able to cause cancer and it is critical to the elderly and chilren according to lots of thesis.

>> It will be able to cause cancer and it is critical to the elderly and children according to lots of thesis.

Second, we can\'t enjoy the outdoor leisure activities.

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If I play outside when the air quality is very bad, I would have sore throat and it would be going to negatively affect my bronchial tubes.

>> If I play outside when the air quality is very bad, I could get a sore throat and it would be going to negatively affect my bronchial tubes.

So, I sould be inside and it will be boring and annoying.

>> So, I should stay inside and it\'ll be boring and annoying.

Therefore I really want a huge air cleaner and enjoy the day without concering about fine dust.

>> Therefore, I really want a hug air cleaner and enjoy the day without getting worried about fine dust.