What ia the most important family gathering in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
In korea, I strongly believe that people want to spend time with their family on Lunar year\'s day. We celebrate the holiday with having Dduck-guk made by rice cake and we also ceremony people who passed away.
Eating the rice cake soup means wishing for family\'s health because we are getting old one year more.
In terms of my house tradition, I prepare lots of foods for my husband\'s sister\'s families and my parents and brothers. After having ceremony at home respectively, we gathered at my house, which all family members eat trasitional foods with talking. Also chidren bow to their parents and get the money for wishing luck.
Lunar year\'s dag is comming. However, I am not sure we will be able to gather this time because if Covid19.
I hope to have a normal holiday with my whole family.
강사 첨삭
Happy new week to you Young Won!
Family gatherings and celebrations make tighter bond among its members. This year as it was last year, if it will be for the better, family gatherings will be limited yet, it can still be fun.
I hope that you can gather your family this year in spite of the pandemic. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about my question.
See you in class today!
-T. Donna
> In Korea, I strongly believe that people want to spend time with their family on Lunar Year\'s Day. We celebrate the holiday having Duck-guk made by rice cake and we also hold a ceremony for people who passed away.
Eating the rice cake soup means wishing for family\'s health because we are getting old one year more.
In terms of my house tradition, I prepare lots of foods for my husband\'s sister\'s families and my parents and brothers.
Lunar year\'s dag is comming. However, I am not sure we will be able to gather this time because if Covid19.
Eating the rice cake soup means wishing for family\'s health because we are getting old one year more.
>> Correct!
In terms of my house tradition, I prepare lots of foods for my husband\'s sister\'s families and my parents and brothers.
>> Correct!
After having ceremony at home respectively, we gathered at my house, which all family members eat trasitional foods with talking. Also chidren bow to their parents and get the money for wishing luck.
>> After having a ceremony at home respectively, we gather at my house in which all family members eat traditional foods with some conversation. Also children bow to their parents and get money for wishing them luck.
Lunar year\'s dag is comming. However, I am not sure we will be able to gather this time because if Covid19.
>> Lunar Year\'s coming. However, I am not sure if we will be able to gather this time because of Covid19.
I hope to have a normal holiday with my whole family.
>> Correct!
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