What if a close friend asked you to give a name for his son or daughter, what name will you suggest
학생이 쓴 원문
Making and giving a unique name in the world is happiness work.
Therefore, It should contain various thoughts and meanings considering one\'s life.
To do that, it need long time and he or she have to study it through various methods and find to get advice from old persons.
but The method of composition a name is different by country\'s culture.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ethan!
Thank you so once again for submitting your homework.
I agree that making and giving someone a name are really awesome!
Indeed, it also takes a lot of time when we\'re thinking of a perfect one considering a lot of factors. ^^
Here are some notes:
For the first sentence, I changed \'is\' to \'are\' since we\'re considering \'making\' and \'giving\' as our subjects in the sentence.
I also changed \'happiness\' to \'happy\' and \'joyful\'. The reason was, happiness can stand alone if you will use it since it\'s a noun.
However, since you used \'work\', I used \'happy\' and \'joyful\' which are adjectives to describe it.
You also don\'t need to add \'-s\' on work since it was used in general and is considered uncountable noun. We will only put an \'-s\' if work was used as a countable noun, if it has a specific context. For example, collections of works or various types of works.
Remember as well that if your subject in a sentence follows a verb, you should follow this rule:
-If the subject is singular, use a verb with \'s\'.
Examples:
It needs a long time.
She cooks well.
He goes to school everyday.
-If the subject is I, You, or plural, use a verb without \'s\'.
Examples:
They need a long time.
Ana and May cook well.
The children go to school everyday.
I hope these notes help. Anyway, I hope that you will have a good day ahead! See you later in class. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Making and giving a unique name in the world are happy work.
>> Or: Making and giving a unique name in the world are joyful work.
>> Or: Making and giving a unique name in the world are happiness.
Therefore, It should contain various thoughts and meanings considering one\'s life.
Therefore, It should contain various thoughts and meanings considering one\'s life.
>> CORRECT.
To do that, it need long time and he or she have to study it through various methods and find to get advice from old persons.
To do that, it need long time and he or she have to study it through various methods and find to get advice from old persons.
>> To do that, it needs a long time and he or she have to study it through various methods and find to get advice from old persons.
but The method of composition a name is different by country\'s culture.
but The method of composition a name is different by country\'s culture.
>> But the method of composing a name is different with each country\'s culture.
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