what if there is another advanced creature in the universe.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello teacher!! Thanks for your supporting!
\"Discovering the other advanced creature is a desire for the scientists. The goal of NASA\'s projects is finding any evidences that can demonstrate the existence of the creature in the universe. If NASA reach the goal, what situation will be happen? In pessimistic way, the advanced creature may want to conquer the earth. If so, the result of curiosity for unknown creature is the losing our freedom. However, I don\'t believe that there is another advanced creature in the universe, because If they exist, then why couldn\'t we find each other? Therefore, We don\'t have to be worried about the future with unknown creature.\"
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! So nice of you to catch up with your homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^Thank you!
Thank you so much for this wonderful thought. I partially agree with you. I agree that these creatures may be hostile and would want to conquer our planet and that we may loose our freedom. But, contrary to what you have said, I definitely believe that other creatures exist, they are so advanced that the reason why we couldn\'t find them is because they wouldn\'t probably want to be seen or to be discovered by us. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>Discovering other advanced creatures has always been a desire not only for scientists but of many.
The goal of NASA\'s projects is finding any evidences that can demonstrate the existence of the creature in the universe.
>>The goal of NASA\'s projects is finding any evidences that can demonstrate the existence of other creatures in the universe.
If NASA reach the goal, what situation will be happen?
>>If NASA reaches that goal, what could possibly happen?
In pessimistic way, the advanced creature may want to conquer the earth.
>>In a pessimistic thought, these advanced creatures may want to conquer the earth.
If so, the result of curiosity for unknown creature is the losing our freedom.
>>If so, the consequences of our curiosity to unknown creatures could mean loosing our freedom.
However, I don\'t believe that there is another advanced creature in the universe, because If they exist, then why couldn\'t we find each other?
>>CORRECT
Therefore, We don\'t have to be worried about the future with unknown creature.\"
>>CORRECT
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