What if you were give three wishes, what would you wish for?
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Wow! This subject makes me really happy to just think about it. I thought about that If I meet a Genie like an Aladdin then what could I possibly wish for? Anyway, first my wish is my health.(My body as well as my spirit) Second wish is \'passion\' on every moment of my life without exhaustion. Third wish is keeping up the good relationship with people who I love until I die.
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Wow! This subject makes me really happy to just think about it.
>>>Wow! This subject makes me really happy just by thinking about it.
I thought about that If I meet a Genie like an Aladdin then what could I possibly wish for?
>>>I thought about when I meet a genie like Aladdin, what could I possibly wish for?
Anyway, first my wish is my health.
>>>Anyway, my first wish is my health.
Second wish is \'passion\' on every moment of my life without exhaustion.
>>>My second wish is passion in every moment of my life without exhaustion.
Third wish is keeping up the good relationship with people who I love until I die.
>>>My third wish is keeping up a good relationship with people who I love until I die.
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