What images spring to mind when you hear the word ‘stress’?

2021-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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The image of person who suffers from burnout comes to my mind when I hear the word \'stress\'. I know there\'s also good stress that can give me good effects but bad stress more comes to my mind than the other when I hear \'stress\'. I guess it\'s because I have plenty of memories that I feel down or bad whenever I got stressed. So, I think it is very important to know how to cope with stress. Everyone has their own way to release their stress. In my case, I mostly sleep for a long time or focus on something that I don\'t have to think about what give me stress. For example, I binge watch dramas or webtoons to forget the source of stress. But, it seems that it don\'t work for me anymore these days so I have to find another ways. I hope I can handle with my stress wisely.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Solyna! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your night! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

The image of person who suffers from burnout comes to my mind when I hear the word \'stress\'.
>> The image of a person who suffers from burnout comes to my mind when I hear the word \'stress\'.

I know there\'s also good stress that can give me good effects but bad stress more comes to my mind than the other when I hear \'stress\'.
>> CORRECT!

I guess it\'s because I have plenty of memories that I feel down or bad whenever I got stressed.
>> CORRECT!

So, I think it is very important to know how to cope with stress. 
>> CORRECT!

Everyone has their own way to release their stress. 
>> CORRECT!

In my case, I mostly sleep for a long time or focus on something that I don\'t have to think about what give me stress. 
>> In my case, I mostly sleep for a long time or focus on something that I don\'t have to think about what gives me stress. 

For example, I binge watch dramas or webtoons to forget the source of stress. 
>> For example, I binge-watch dramas or webtoons to forget the source of stress. 

But, it seems that it don\'t work for me anymore these days so I have to find another ways. 
>> But, it seems that it doesn\'t work for me anymore these days so I have to find other ways. 

I hope I can handle with my stress wisely.
>> I hope I can handle my stress wisely.

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