What images spring to mind when you hear the word 'war'?
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Millions of children and young people worldwide are affected by armed conflict.
They are confronted with physical harm, violence, danger, exploitation, fear and loss.
Adults are busy surviving, parents have little time for their children.
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When we have war it will be not good.
>> It is not good to have a war.
OR: It\'s never good to be in a war.
Iwill be afraid of going out.
>> Correct! [I will be afraid of going out.]
OR: I will be afraid to go out.
BE CAREFUL WITH YOUR SPACING.
When I have war I will go busan and stay there.
>> If there\'s a war, I would go to Busan and stay there.
Then when war is over. I will be died or go to see war. I will be injured too.
>> I could be injured or dead before the war\'s over.
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