What influenced your choice of job?(Why did you choose your job?)
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The most important things I consider when I choose a job is career and salary.
The company I chose is in the top of semiconductor industry. So I think it will be plus to my career.
So I choose this company.
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Hello Julia! ^^
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful night. :)
~ T. Tricia
The most important things I consider when I choose a job is career and salary.
>> CORRECT!
The company I chose is in the top of semiconductor industry. So I think it will be plus to my career.
>> The company I chose is at the top of the semiconductor industry. So I think it will be a plus for my career.
So I choose this company.
>> So, I chose this company.
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