What influences me in my choice it will be money and other people's advices.

Hello, Wee!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

Wow! You are a strong independent man and I admire you for that.

That\'s correct! Don\'t forget to thank the people who helped you hone your skills and be the person you are right now. ☺

Talk to you later ☺

I do my work on my own.

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>> OR: I do my work all by myself.

My mother let me do it alone myself since I was young when I came to think of it.

>> My mother let me do it alone since I was young if I remember it clearly.

>> OR: My mother let me do it all by myself since I was young if I am not mistaken.

I try to think the world is good place to live.
>> I try to think that the world is a good place to live.

I am now working at company that pays well more than I think. 

>> I am now working at a company that pays well more than I imagined.

And I can play the violin.
>> I can also play the violin.

And I can study English at my will in Korea.
>> I can study English at my in Korea as well.

I thank all these things and the people who made what I am now.
>> I thank the people who made the person that I am now.

Thank for reading.
Bye.

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