What influences other people in their dreams or ambition?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that I get confidence in my mind by seeing them.
It is important who I meet around me.
They are spreading to many people how to make dreams come true.
You take the class with someone to make my mission and my vision .
after that you make a group chat with them.
and you wrote it in our group chat where I wrote what to do every day.
And we cheer up together.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Julia!
I guess being with people who have the same views with you, gives a favorable impact in your life.
Keep doing and following what you hope for the future. I know that you can help a lot of young people create their own dreams. Fighting
Have a great day :)
Aki~
I think that I get confidence in my mind by seeing them.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I think I get confidence by seeing them.
It is important who I meet around me.
>>> It is important to know the people that I meet.
They are spreading to many people how to make dreams come true.
>>> CORRECT!
You take the class with someone to make my mission and my vision.
>>> You take the class with someone in order to fulfill your mission and vision.
after that you make a group chat with them.
>>> Then make a group chat with them.
and you wrote it in our group chat where I wrote what to do every day.
>>> And write on the group chat what you want to do every day.
And we cheer up together.
>>> And we cheer each other up.
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