What influences styles, values and intrests of a generation?

2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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In my opinion, two things influence the stlyes, values and interests of a generation. The first things is parents\' generation. All of us are strongly affected by our parents unconsciously. A lot of parents behave alike each other so, their children are affected similarly. Thus their generation get a specific life style together. The second thing is political and economical policies. Polictical policies influence education and education can control people easily. For example, education can teach people specific historic person in both way good and bad, which is appropriate for political policy. And economical polies make people decide how to spend their money. It is very important because we live in capitalism. So, if prices are getting highr, people would buy only what they really need and then share the last things that they need. This situation is the current younger generation\'s situation.

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In my opinion, two things influence the stlyes, values and interests of a generation.

>> In my opinion, two things influence styles, values and interests of a generation.


The first things is parents\' generation.

>> The first thing is the parents\' generation.


All of us are strongly affected by our parents unconsciously.

>> CORRECT


A lot of parents behave alike each other so, their children are affected similarly.

>> A lot of parents behave alike so their children are affected similarly.


Thus their generation get a specific life style together.

>> Thus, their generation got a specific lifestyle altogether.


The second thing is political and economical policies.

>> CORRECT


Polictical policies influence education and education can control people easily.

>> Political policies influence education and education controls people easily.


For example, education can teach people specific historic person in both way good and bad, which is appropriate for political policy.

>> For example, education can teach people specific historical people in both good and bad ways, which is appropriate for political policies.


And economical polies make people decide how to spend their money.

>> Also, economical policies make people decide how to spend their money.


It is very important because we live in capitalism.

>> CORRECT


So, if prices are getting highr, people would buy only what they really need and then share the last things that they need.

>> So, if prices get higher, people would buy only what they really need and then share the last things that they need.


This situation is the current younger generation\'s situation.

>> CORRECT

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