What influences you to make good choices?
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Hi [이름]! Happy Friday!
You mentioned \'dometory\' in your homework. If what you\'re talking about Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw and Slytherin, I think what you\'re trying to say is dormitory. ^^
You did great anyway! ~
See you later!
-T. Elisha
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after seeing the harry potter, one influences me to make good choices.
>> After seeing Harry Potter, one part of the story influenced me to make good choices.
there are 4 dometories in the story.
>> There are 4 dormitories mentioned in the story.
or:
>> There are 4 houses mentioned in the story.
my favorite dometory is hufflepuff.
>> My favorite dormitory is Hufflepuff.
or:
>> My favorite is the House of Hufflepuff.
because they don\'t seek power just think about what is right?
>> I like it because they don\'t seek power and they do what they think is right.
so after knowing about hufflepuff , when i\'m in some situation i usually think about that quiestion myself.
>> After hearing about Hufflepuff, I usually ask that question to myself whenever I\'m put in a similar situation.
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