What information can be shared with customers, and what must remain confidential?
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Topic: What information can be shared with customers, and what must remain confidential?
The information that can be shared is related to the customer\'s work. Generally company confidential data can\'t share it.
Company has data security class. All staff must follow regulations to protect the company\'s confidential information.
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Hi! You did a good job explaining what information can be shared with customers and what must remain confidential. I made a few corrections to make your sentences clearer and more professional.
-Teacher Wela
Generally company confidential data can\'t share it.
>> Generally, company confidential data cannot be shared.
Company has data security class. All staff must follow regulations to protect the company\'s confidential information.
>> The company has a data security policy, and all staff must follow the regulations to protect confidential information.
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