What inspired you to start collecting souvenir plates as a hobby?

2024-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jewel

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After I set the table food, My daughter always takes picture. I like that I start setting table lovely, I am intersted in collecting plates. There are many preeety dishes in the world.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ju Mi! Your plate collection must be beautiful. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Enjoy your day today!
~T. Jewel
After I set the table food, My daughter always takes picture.
>>After I set the table with food, my daughter always takes a picture.
I like that.
>> CORRECT
I start setting table lovely,
>>I start setting a lovely table.
I am intersted in collecting plates.
>>I am interested in collecting plates.
There are many preeety dishes in the world.
>>There are many pretty dishes in the world.

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