What inspires you to be better?

Hi there Ms. [이름] [이름]! 

A fantastic job as usual! Your composition is well made tonight. Your answers are always inspirational. Don\'t worry Ms. [이름] [이름], I also enjoy talking to you a lot, especially when we have free talking classes because I get to learn more about you. I\'m looking forward to our next class on Monday. Anyway, have a happy and safe weekend. 

~t.Karen (>.^__^<)

Happy Friday ^^*

>> Correct! ^^ 

Thank you for your comments.

>> Correct! ^^

I try to search the English language exercise videos. 

>> I will try to search for the English language exercise videos. 

>> ** Since are planning on searching for the videos, use the auxiliary verb \"Will\" to show that the event will take place in the future. 

It also must be good for my health.

>> It must also be good for my health.

>> The auxiliary verb \"Must\" usually comes first before adverbs. Examples:

a. I must quickly eat my meals. 

b. Denis must carefully choose his bride. 

I want to lose some weight. ^^

>> Correct! ^^ 

Anyway, Next Monday, I\'d like to talk about exercise.

>> Anyway, next Monday, I\'d like to talk about \"Exercise\".

>> ** Do not capitalize the first letter of the word \"Next\". You only need to capitalize the first letter of a word if: 

1. It is the beginning of a sentence.

2. It is a proper noun. 

3. It is the pronoun \"I\".

I hope that I want to talk about all different topic with you.

>> I hope that I\'d be able to talk about different topics with you.

>> ** Revise your sentence to make it easier to understand. 

If you don\'t mind.... ^^

>> Correct! ^^ 

Let\'s do homework.

>> Let\'s do the homework. 

>> ** Use the article \"The\" since you are talking about a specific homework, something that you and I know about. 

What inspires you to be better?

>> Correct! ^^ 

It is a difficult question for me.

>> Correct! ^^ 

I had to think about that about 1 hour.

>> Correct! ^^ 

There are two reasons about it.

>> There are two reasons behind it. 

>> ** The expression is: \"Reason behind\". Example:

1. The reason behind his disappearance is already clear to everyone. 

Do you Know Kim Yu Na who is famous and beautiful figure skate athlete in korea?

>> Do you know Kim Yun Na? Who is a famous and beautiful figure skate athlete in Korea. 

>> ** Do not capitalize the first letter of the word \"Know\" but you should capitalize the first letter of the word \"Korea\" because it is a proper noun. You only need to capitalize the first letter of a word if: 

1. It is the beginning of a sentence.

2. It is a proper noun. 

3. It is the pronoun \"I\".

I was inspired by her.

>> Correct! ^^ 

When she was 7 years old, She began to do exercise figure skate. 

>> When she was 7 years old, she began to exercise figure skating.

OR

>> When she was 7 years old, she began to do figure skating. 

>> ** Use the word \"Skating\" because it is referring to the actually activity, while \"Skate\" is referringt to the equipment used in figure skating. 

>> ** Do not capitalize the first letter of the word \"She\". You only need to capitalize the first letter of a word if: 

1. It is the beginning of a sentence.

2. It is a proper noun. 

3. It is the pronoun \"I\".

She has been learnt for more than 10 years.

>> She has been learning for more than 10 years. 

She had a lot of injuries and troubles with confidence,patience.

>> She had a lot of injuries and trouble with her confidence and her patience. 

>> ** Since you are enumerating her characteristics, you can combine them by using the conjunction \"And\".

But,in the end she became Olympic Champion before 2 years ago.

>> But, in the end, she became an Olympic champion 2 years go. 

>> ** Don\'t forget the article \"An\"

>> ** Do not capitalize the first letter of the word \"Champion\". You only need to capitalize the first letter of a word if: 

1. It is the beginning of a sentence.

2. It is a proper noun. 

3. It is the pronoun \"I\".

>> ** Remove  the word \"Before\" because it would already be redundant. 

I want to give a gig hand to her.

>> I want to give her a big hand. 

I envy her.

>> Correct! ^^ 

I want to be a person who don\'t give up goals whatever I fall into adversity.

>> I want to be a person who doesn\'t give up her goals whatever adversity I may fall into.

>> ** Since you are talking about only one person, use \"Doesn\'t\".

Secondly, I also inspired by best friends\' advices through the meeting.

>> Secondly, I am also inspired by my best friend\'s advices through our meeting.

>> ** Don\'t forget your verb \"Am\".

>> ** Use the possessive pronoun \"My\" to indicate whose best friend you are talking about.