What is 1 wish you badly want this christmas?
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I want to go to the exhibition, but because of COVID19, I have to go to the place that people don’t crowded. So I want to go to my favorite friend house and do a fantastic party! For example eating cake, chatting with my friends, exchange gifts and taking pictures! I want to end COVID19..TT
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your answers!
I wish you and your family a merry Christmas!
See you next time~
I want to go to the exhibition, but because of COVID19, I have to go to the place that people don’t crowded.
>>I want to go to the exhibition but because of COVID-19, I have to go to places where it\'s not crowded.
So I want to go to my favorite friend house and do a fantastic party!
>>So I want to go to my best friend\'s house and have a fantastic party!
For example eating cake, chatting with my friends, exchange gifts and taking pictures!
>>For example eating cake ,chatting with my friends, exchanging gifts and taking pitures!
I want to end COVID19..TT
>>CORRECT
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