What is a big world problem that you would like to change?
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A big world problem that I would like to change is Global Warming. It is because if it gets worse the earth would be hotter and North Pole glaciers would melt then the earth couldn’t reflect sunlight the earth temperature will be hot. Eventually a lot of animals will die and the ecosystem will be destroyed. I know a lot of carbon emissions cause Global Warming so if we reduce carbon emission we could prevent Global Warming.
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>> A big world problem that I would like to change is Global Warming.
It is because if it gets worse the earth would be hotter and North Pole
glaciers would melt then the earth temperature will be hot because the sunlight will not reflect from the earth. Eventually a lot of animals will die and the
ecosystem will be destroyed. I know a lot of carbon emissions caused
Global Warming so if we reduce carbon emission we could prevent Global
Warming.
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