What is a \"bucket list\"? What are 5 things on your bucket list?
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1. Going to rock festival(Because of the covid pendemic....)
2. Gardening in my house after entire a work.
3. Drinking a coffee and wine in Italy.
4. Lunching my own brand.
5. Spending Christmas day in New York.
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Hi Julia!
Thanks for sharing your bucket lists. I hope that you will be able to experience those things you listed. Have a great weekend!
T. Aki~
1. Going to rock festival(Because of the covid pendemic....)
>>> Going to a rock festival ( Because of the Covid19 Pandemic...)
2. Gardening in my house after entire a work.
>>> Gardening in my house after an entire a work day.
3. Drinking a coffee and wine in Italy.
3. Drinking a coffee and wine in Italy.
>>> Drinking coffee and wine in Italy.
4. Lunching my own brand.
4. Lunching my own brand.
>>> Launching my own brand.
5. Spending Christmas day in New York.
5. Spending Christmas day in New York.
>>> Correct!
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