What is a bus station? / Where’s the nearest bus station in your place?
학생이 쓴 원문
The bus station is the place to take a bus. When we stand in front of the station and wait for a few minutes, everyone who has a bus card or cash can ride a bus. In city there have so many bus stations to use. Also, recently I saw many chairs change to warm chairs that make us more convenient to use a bus. My nearest bus station is Gusan Station. I can walk there for roughly 2~3 minutes. And I use it often.
강사 첨삭
Hi Risa,
Bus stations and terminals are a significant element in the operation of bus services. Their design and location affect the efficiency of a transport system, and its impact on other road users. Have a great weekend..:) ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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The bus station is the place to take a bus.
>> A place where buses start and end their routes and where the buses stop to pick up and drop off passengers.
When we stand in front of the station and wait for a few minutes, everyone who has a bus card or cash can ride a bus.
>> When we stand in front of the station and wait for a few minutes, everyone who has a bus card or cash can ride a bus. (Correct)
In city there have so many bus stations to use.
>> In the city, there have so many bus stations to use.
Also, recently I saw many chairs change to warm chairs that make us more convenient to use a bus.
>> Also, recently I saw many chairs and they change them to warm chairs that make us more convenient to use a bus.
My nearest bus station is Gusan Station.
>>The nearest bus station in my place is Gusan Station.
I can walk there for roughly 2~3 minutes. And I use it often.
>> I can walk there for roughly 2~3 minutes. And I usually go there when I want to ride a bus.
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The bus station is the place to take a bus. When we stand in front of the station and wait for a few minutes, everyone who has a bus card or cash can ride a bus. In city there have so many bus stations to use. Also, recently I saw many chairs change to warm chairs that make us more convenient to use a bus. My nearest bus station is Gusan Station. I can walk there for roughly 2~3 minutes. And I use it often.
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