What is a \'canon event\'?
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Canon event is a important event in one\'s life that determines who you are. I saw canon event memes in YouTube, which are all related to spider-man. I don\'t know why spider-man appears in every canon event memes. But in most of the memes, some bad things happen and they say it was a canon event. For example, when a stone from universe hits the earth then a Spiderman appears and says it is just a canon event.
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Canon event is a important event in one\'s life that determines who you are.
>> Correct!
OR: A Canon event is an important event in someone\'s life that shapes who they are.
I saw canon event memes in YouTube, which are all related to spider-man.
>> Correct!
OR: I discovered canon event memes on YouTube, all of which are related to Spider-Man.
I don\'t know why spider-man appears in every canon event memes.
>> Correct!
OR: I\'m not sure why Spider-Man appears in all canon event memes.
But in most of the memes, some bad things happen and they say it was a canon event.
>> Correct!
OR: However, in the majority of memes, bad things happen and are attributed to a canon event.
For example, when a stone from universe hits the earth then a Spiderman appears and says it is just a canon event.
>> Correct!
OR: For example, when a stone from the universe collides with the earth, Spiderman appears and claims it is just a canon event.
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