What is a challenge you would never want to face?

2018-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I have already experienced a hateful faiulure before. And I aware that some disappointing things cannot be avoided. So, I really hope I will not face a challenge with respect to study. Neverthless, I need to get over that if a negative stuff come again.

강사 첨삭

[이름],

That\'s the right attitude. We shouldn\'t dwell on the negative but rather  we should think on the positive. See you tomorrow!(\",)

~Lynn

I have already experienced a hateful failure before.

>> correct!
 And I aware that some disappointing things cannot be avoided. 
 So, I really hope I will not face a challenge with respect to study.

>> I\'m aware that some disappointing things cannot be avoided so I really hope I will not face a challenge again with respect to studying.
 Nevertheless, I need to get over that if a negative stuff come again.

>> Nevertheless, I need to get over that because a negative stuff can happen again.

OR>> Nevertheless, I need to get over any negative things that happen. 

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