What is a gadget you would like to invent? What would it do?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s been a so long time since I\'ve thought creative ideas.
I\'d like to invent a robot cleaner for a bathroom, because it haven\'t invented yet.
And cleaning bathroom makes me feel irritated.
There are a lot of things to do while bathroom cleaning such as removing molds, water stains, stuff like that.
That\'s why I want to invent it and be free from bathroom cleaning.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
2. I\'d like to invent a robot cleaner for a bathroom, because it haven\'t invented yet.
3. And cleaning bathroom makes me feel irritated.
4. There are a lot of things to do while bathroom cleaning such as removing molds, water stains, stuff like that.
5. That\'s why I want to invent it and be free from bathroom cleaning.
Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you have a meaningful weekend ahead!
~T. Divina^^
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1. It\'s been a so long time since I\'ve thought creative ideas.
>>It’s been such a long time since I’ve thought of creative ideas.
2. I\'d like to invent a robot cleaner for a bathroom, because it haven\'t invented yet.
>>I’d like to invent a bathroom-cleaning robot because it hasn’t been invented yet.
3. And cleaning bathroom makes me feel irritated.
>>Cleaning the bathroom makes me feel irritated.
4. There are a lot of things to do while bathroom cleaning such as removing molds, water stains, stuff like that.
>>There are a lot of things to do when cleaning the bathroom, such as removing mold, water stains, and other stuff.
5. That\'s why I want to invent it and be free from bathroom cleaning.
>>That’s why I want to invent it and be free from cleaning the bathroom.
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