What is a goal? How important are the goals for you?
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I think a goal is to achieve what I want.
If I have a goal, I live my life more meaningfully to achieve it.
And even if I don\'t achieve the goals, I can learn more from the experiences.
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I think a goal is to achieve what I want.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I think a goal is to achieve something that I want.
If I have a goal, I live my life more meaningfully to achieve it.
>> CORRECT!
And even if I don\'t achieve the goals, I can learn more from the experiences.
>> And even if I don\'t achieve the goals that I have set, I can learn more from the experiences.
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