What is a goal that you’ve recently achieved?
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What is a goal that you’ve recently achieved?
It’s a tough question to answer. People usually set goals for themselves in the new year. I also set goals recently, my challenge is currently ongoing. So far, I am working on several challenges.
First, I am reading bible 5chapters every day. My goal is to read the whole bible, starting from ‘Genesis’ to ‘Revelation.’ It’s tough and sometimes it’s boring. However, I’ve been reading continuously and have never piled up. Now I am reading ‘Deuteronomy.’
Second, I want to achieve ‘Ophic’ AL degree, which is difficult and already tried twice. Now, I have no idea how to solve this problem. I’ve been considering new ways of studying or methods.
Finally, my most challenging goal is to become 70kg. I just weigh the weight; I am now 64.75kg. I once, weighed 67.8kg, which was my highest weight ever. I failed last year, but my challenge won’t be over.
After 6months please ask me this question again. Let’s see what goals will be achieved.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Diego!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
It’s a tough question to answer.
>> CORRECT!People usually set goals for themselves in the new year.
>> CORRECT!I also set goals recently, my challenge is currently ongoing.
>> CORRECT!So far, I am working on several challenges.
>> CORRECT!
First, I am reading bible 5 chapters every day.
>> First, I am reading the bible 5 chapters every day.
My goal is to read the whole bible, starting from ‘Genesis’ to ‘Revelation.’
>> CORRECT!
It’s tough and sometimes it’s boring.
>> CORRECT!
However, I’ve been reading continuously and have never piled up.
>> CORRECT!
Now I am reading ‘Deuteronomy.’
>> CORRECT!
Second, I want to achieve ‘Ophic’ AL degree, which is difficult and already tried twice. >> Second, I want to achieve ‘OPIC-AL degree, which is difficult and I already tried it twice.
Now, I have no idea how to solve this problem.
>> CORRECT!
I’ve been considering new ways of studying or methods.
>> I’ve been considering new ways or methods of studying.
Finally, my most challenging goal is to become 70kg.
>> CORRECT!
I just weigh the weight; I am now 64.75kg.
>> CORRECT!
I once, weighed 67.8kg, which was my highest weight ever.
>> I once, weighed 67.8kg, which was my highest weight ever.
I failed last year, but my challenge won’t be over.
>> CORRECT!
After 6months please ask me this question again. >> CORRECT!
Let’s see what goals will be achieved.
>> CORRECT!
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