What is a good education?
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I think that the best educational system does not exist because every children has different characteristics. What they want to do or what they want to be is different from person to person. Nevertheless, I believe that there can be a good education, but it is not definitely what I am saying.
I guess that a good education should allow children to do what they want to. Although children have to learn about the basic knowledge and skills, basically, parents or school makes their children enjoy learning. There is a saying "A genious cannot defeat a person making every effort, the person making efforts cannot defeat a person enjoying his work." Like this words, children enjoying their learning will study very hard while their parents not forcing them. Then, naturally, he will be able to be what they want and his life also will be happy.
Of course, I admit that it is difficult, but we try to do that. I think that it is required constant efforts to attain a good education.
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Hello Miss. [Name]!
Thank you for doing your homework right away. I agree that a good education is very important in molding a person\'s character and future. Thank you for your ideas today!
~Kelly^^
I think that the best educational system does not exist because every children has different characteristics.
>> I think that the best educational system does not exist because every child has different characteristics.
What they want to do or what they want to be is different from person to person.
>> What they want to do or what they want to be is different from others.
Nevertheless, I believe that there can be a good education, but it is not definitely what I am saying.
>> Correct.I guess that a good education should allow children to do what they want to.
>> I guess that a good education should allow children to do what they want to achieve.
Although children have to learn about the basic knowledge and skills, basically, parents or school makes their children enjoy learning.
>> Although children have to learn about the basic knowledge and skills that they need to learn in life; parents or schools should make their children enjoy learning.
There is a saying \"A genious cannot defeat a person making every effort, the person making efforts cannot defeat a person enjoying his work.\"
>> Correct.
Like this words, children enjoying their learning will study very hard while their parents not forcing them.
>> Like these words, children enjoying their learning will study very hard while their parents are not forcing them.
Then, naturally, he will be able to be what they want and his life also will be happy.
>> Then, naturally, he will become what he wants to be and his life will also be happy.Of course, I admit that it is difficult, but we try to do that.
>> Of course, I admit that it is difficult, but we have to try it.
I think that it is required constant efforts to attain a good education.
>> I think that a good education requires constant effort.
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