What is a habit that you learned from a family member or friend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a habit that is to go to catholic church, every Sunday.
Our family religion is catholic for four generation so, I am a believer from birth.
Kelly, there was a power outage at my home 2 days ago. so, my house is out of internet service from then.
so, I couldn\'t access the internet and was forced to miss class today. I gonna fix up quickly and see you on wed.
bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s wonderful to hear that your family has such a strong tradition. Faith is really important.
Thanks for letting me know! No worries, I understand. Hope your internet gets fixed soon. See you on Wednesday. Take care!
~Kelly^^
I have a habit that is to go to catholic church, every Sunday.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I have a habit that is to go to catholic church, every Sunday.
Our family religion is catholic for four generation so, I am a believer from birth.>> Our family has been Catholic for four generations, so I have been a believer since birth.
Kelly, there was a power outage at my home 2 days ago. so, my house is out of internet service from then.
>> Kelly, there was a power outage at my home two days ago, so my house has been without internet service since then.
so, I couldn\'t access the internet and was forced to miss class today. I gonna fix up quickly and see you on wed.
>> As a result, I couldn\'t access the internet and was forced to miss class today. I\'m going to fix it quickly and see you on Wednesday.
bye~
>> Correct
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