What is a natural habitat? / How would you describe our habitat?
학생이 쓴 원문
Natural habitat is where the animals or living organisms are leading their life. Natural habitat is different by animals and their characteristic it\'s can be a land, forest, apartment, aquatic area. For example, wild boar, elk, snakes are living in the field and a roe deer and a tiger are living in forest. In there they can protect themself and be stable but nowadays many of natural habitat is developing into humans facility, like a tunnel. In addition because of that many wild animals get a traffic accident so a lot of conservation groups to be alert in this.
강사 첨삭
Hi Risa,
All organisms need to adapt to their habitat to be able to survive. This means adapting to be able to survive the climatic conditions of the ecosystem, predators, and other species that compete for the same food and space that\'s the reason why animals live in different natural habitats. ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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Natural habitat is where the animals or living organisms are leading their life.
>> Natural habitat is where the animals or living organisms live or are leading their life.
Natural habitat is different by animals and their characteristic it\'s can be a land, forest, apartment, aquatic area.
>> Animals live in different natural habitats and these can be on land, forest, apartment, aquatic area, and others.
For example, wild boar, elk, snakes are living in the field and a roe deer and a tiger are living in forest.
>> For example, wild boar, elk, snakes are living in the field and a roe deer and a tiger are living in the forest.
In there they can protect themself and be stable but nowadays many of natural habitat is developing into humans facility, like a tunnel.
>> In there they can protect themselves and be stable. But nowadays many natural habitats are developing into a human facility, like a tunnel.
In addition because of that many wild animals get a traffic accident so a lot of conservation groups to be alert in this.
>> In addition, many wild animals died because of traffic accidents and that\'s why a lot of conservation groups need to be very alert about what is happening.
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Natural habitat is where the animals or living organisms are leading their life. Natural habitat is different by animals and their characteristic it\'s can be a land, forest, apartment, aquatic area. For example, wild boar, elk, snakes are living in the field and a roe deer and a tiger are living in forest. In there they can protect themself and be stable but nowadays many of natural habitat is developing into humans facility, like a tunnel. In addition because of that many wild animals get a traffic accident so a lot of conservation groups to be alert in this.
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