What is a new hobby that you would want to try?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have a chance to have my own garden, I would like to try a gardening. I love apending my time on making craft by hand and good at those kind of things. Making boucquet with aeasonal flowers gave me a great joyness. About three years ago, there was a flower class for mothers at my son\'s school. I started flower arrangement with that apportunity but moreover from that I want to plant flowers on the ground instead of cutting them. Because boucquet didn\'t exist longer than one week. I hope to see flowers bloom and set every year.
강사 첨삭
Hello Young Won!
\"A thing of beauty is a joy forever.\" -John Keats.
It is true that flowers and plants bring us joy even more when we see them grow in our own garden.
I hope that you will get the chance to grow your own garden in Canada soon!
See you in a few.
-T. Donna =)
>> If I have a chance to have my own garden, I would like to try gardening.
I love apending my time on making craft by hand and good at those kind of things.
>> I love appending my time on making crafts by hand and I am also good at those kinds of things.
Making boucquet with aeasonal flowers gave me a great joyness.
>> Making a bouquet with seasonal flowers gives me a great joy.
About three years ago, there was a flower class for mothers at my son\'s school.
>> Correct!
I started flower arrangement with that apportunity but moreover from that I want to plant flowers on the ground instead of cutting them.
>> I started flower arrangement with that opportunity. Moreover from that, I wanted to plant flowers on the ground instead of cutting them.
Because boucquet didn\'t exist longer than one week. I hope to see flowers bloom and set every year.
>> Because a bouquet doesn\'t exist longer than one week, I hope to see flowers bloom and set every year.
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